Showing posts with label Fanfic 2 Read. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Fanfic 2 Read. Show all posts

Saturday, May 26, 2012

Fanfic 2 Read: Kaizoku Sentai Gokaiger Vs Power Ranger Samurai

Ah! I am finally back! After a long time of hibernating from blog posts that nobody actually care about and from fanfiction of fictions, someone finally help me by telling me what could I post next. Thanks a lot, ChrisX. Check out his post because it seems he is waay better than me in getting ideas on what to post. Seriously, I have no idea on what should I do.

Before I talked about Zukini's Super Sentai Vs Power Ranger, where we found out how much unsatisfactory I can have toward his. My fanfiction is cretainly bad, but I certainly hates someone who is waay worse than mine.

So, if you think that SSVsPR is bad because of the uncontrollable amount of characters, you might have thought that smaller amount of characters will make more differences, right? Well, let me introduce you to Kaizoku Sentai Gokaiger Vs Power Ranger Samurai by Arnold McGuire 335.

If there is a team-up of these two only, I'm still going to support it. In fact, I'm doing it right now...


A hate fic. Showing his hatred toward Power Rangers. Making them a bad guy when we obviously know that ALL Power Rangers are good people. Seriously, have you ever seen bad Power Rangers? Owh, you are thinking about Green Mighty Morphin, Psycho Rangers and White Dino Thunder (both versions) right?

Well, guess what! Green MM and White DT (Trent) are all used by evil. They couldn't think straight much at that time. But when they do, they started fighting for good, right? And the other White DT is just a clone all along. Psycho Rangers? They don't have the word 'Power' inside their team name. You cannot call them Power Rangers without that...

So, Arnold's sole reason for hating PR is because, we all know, they are adaptations of Super Sentai. So what?

Why won't he goes mad about Zaido, Metal Heroes' adaptation to Philipine? And what about Kamen Rider Dragon Knight, KR Ryuki's US version?

I don't mind if you want to hate on Power Rangers IF their story are really bad (example: Disney's Power Rangers, mostly SPD, except RPM) but NOT because of the fact that they are adaptations.

So what if there people who thinks every colored heroes are Power Rangers? It's not like they actually know what Super Sentai is. They don't get the sudden knowledge of Super Sentai after watching Power Rangers to actually acknowledge them. You know them by research.

And they did not deserve the hate because they obviously tell everyone that they are adapted from Super Sentai in the credits. Owh, wait. Did anyone actually bother in watching credit? No? Well, that's your fault. Don't blame them.

To be honest, I love Power Rangers as well, especially RPM. Maybe not much on Samurai, but there are Power Rangers that is awesome! Just like how there are Super Sentai that gives a bit of facepalming by fans...

Anyway, back to the fanfic, it's mostly about how the two team meet up and fight. Without any proper intro. They were all like "Hey, I hate you. Let's fight."

Seriously? The very first introduction they could have get in any team up is "Who are you? Let's introduce ourselves together."

Heck, I don't think Carranger Vs Ohranger did "I hate you. Let's fight," before they fight each other. They were more like "Why are you helping that thing that I think is evil? You deserve a fight!" kind of thing.

You know what good intro I think we should have for both group? Like this:

Luka: Shinkenger? But we have their keys.

Gai: They are not Shinkenger! Not from what I know.

Marvelous: Interesting!

Emily: Are they...Power Rangers too

Mike: Maybe they are the different kind of Power Rangers. You know, like RPM?

Jayden: Let us find out.

There. Simple. Is it so hard to think of something like that?

Owh, and guess what? He makes it as if Samurai are evil that they trusted obviously monsters that easy. Not to be racist here, but if you never have an alien friend before, how can you trust a monster-looking alien to fight human-looking alien that obviously leaving with earthling peacefully just like that? What, is Samurai lose their kindness now, that they just blatantly fight them?

And no! Power Rangers are NOT the copy of Super Sentai! Let me ask you this. Is the name of the Red Samurai is Takeru Shiba? Is the name of that thing they use to change is called Shodophone? Is the villain is called Gedoushuu? Is the name of the goddamn main robot is Shinken-Oh? Are the characters of the show are mostly Japanese? Are you thinking that Power Rangers are not just the imitation of Super Sentai? Then if all the answers are no, then congratulations! You failed English! You literally didn't know what the meaning of the word "copy".

Call me Grammar Nazi, but you are literally making yourself a fool if you think that way, the same as how fool those people who thinks Super Sentai is the adaptation of Power Rangers. No, maybe you are worse because you actually know those two!

And how did the two team ended up together? I DON'T KNOW! NO F(BLEEP)ING EXPLANATION!

We all know that in Super Hero Taisen, Marvelous actually said to the rest of Gokaigers that both Kamen Riders and Super Sentai cannot live in the same world together. Meaning, somehow their worlds emerge.

But did Arnold say anything about how the two fuse? No idea. He didn't even mention any.

And Mega Mode is used outside of Megazord battle? How stupid is...he? Or she? I don't know, can someone confirm this Arnold's identity? I don't even know if he is a human or a Zangyack alien. Maybe he works with Basco, trying to put up a fight between the two team so that Gokaiger will get casualities while Basco effortlessly get all the powers. Maybe he works with Deker, trying to kill of those Samurai so that Jayden will be in despair and agree to fight Deker?

Either way, the fic is cancelled because obviously hate fics will never get their proper endings.

Hmmm, this Arnold alien give me a good one-shot review fic idea; a continuation of that thing! I'll give you a spoiler, thanks to RPM and Akibaranger, the barrier of the worlds will be open and let the two team to beat up Arnold to death. Okay, maybe worse than just dead...

Owh, stars? Nah, this thing is already canceled, so it does not deserve even 0.000001 star(s).

Seriously, if you guys are looking for a better Gokaiger Vs Samurai, just read GokaiMaster's because it is indeed the true team up fic.

(SELF-PROMOTING SINCE NO ONE SEEMS TO CARE ABOUT MY FANFIC-EXCLUSIVE BLOG)

If you guys looking for a fic that combines Japanese's Tokusatsu Super Heroes, American's Marvel Super Heroes (since I don't read DC) and some other stuff that knows how to handle an incredibly uncontrollable amount of characters, read my Affliate Zero. If you want to know how the lives of certain heroes like Marvelous, Ahim or Gentaro from Kamen Rider Fourze if they have different storylines, read my Affliate Zero: Sacred Jewelries. Or to know what happen if men are extinct to only few people on the earth, read my Affliate Zero Side-Story: Apocalypse.

Wednesday, January 4, 2012

Fanfic 2 Read: Kamen Rider Decade x Kamen Rider Dragon Knight

Ah, back to Kamen Rider. There just so many interesting stuff about Super Sentai fanfics, but keep those up and I'm scared that people will say how biased I am. Well, up until now my only follower is ChrisX, so those bias thinging might still far.



Finally back to Kamen Rider fanfic. And now I am going to review Kamen Rider Decade X Kamen Dragon Knight by PhinalPhantasy. It is a combination of both hateful Decade series and the infamous successful adaptation Dragon Knight. And while I am doing this thing, I just don't know what's up with Phinal. Why is he taking so long to finish this? I don't know. That's his life, not mine. He probably have a life, unlike someone who wasted his time finishing his nobody-care fanfics. (crying)

So, the story is about Hikari Studio ended up rather than somewhere in Japan, it is somewhere in USA. That happens when Kit Taylor a.k.a. Dragon Knight is going to save his father from JTC a.k.a. Strike and those two not-attractive Asian brothers, who happen to have no stereotype. That's the first one I saw.

So, I'll give out of five stars...wait, you actually want me to review the whole thing? Fine!

 First of all, I am not a big, not even a small fan of non-canon storyline. It's fine if one story is original to its own world, but if you trying to change the history given in the canon storyline? It's a huge NO! Why must you destroy every single canon story given just according to what your heart desire? Are you dissatisfied with what happened? Can't you just let it go away?

Apparently no. Phinal screwed up a lot of Dragon Knight element. And the only thing I love is the short crack pairing of Tsukasa and Kase, and it is really short. Owh, wait. There's no such pairing in that story. SO that just mean there is nothing I love about this.

Except for how the author keeps up a good work in grammar and stuff. Meh, he's an American. No big deal.

What I also love about him is how he isn't the type that give up (from what I saw). His story takes a really long time to update. By long I mean it can take up more than a year just to update one chapter. ONE CHAPTER!

THAT'S FOR SCREWING EVERYTHING! WHY MUST YOU MAKE ONYX THE BAD GUY! HE IS THE COOLEST RIDER IN THAT SERIES! AND KAITO IS EVIL? HE IS NEVER NEAR THAT! EVEN IF HE IS HALF-JUSTICE HEARTED, BUT THERE IS NO WAY HE'S NEARING ANY BIG BAD GUY!

Well, at least we get to see Knight Vs Wing Knight, which can be pretty funny on how Kase tried to determine which one is the real Len. Of course, Knight is not a drone there (wait, what the hell?) and Ryuki fan should not forget that his name is Ren, which thanks to R-L problem in Japan, can be translated as Len. Hey, I'm sorry for explaining the pun joke here, but if you can't understand any pun here, why bother shouting at my face on how I spoiled everything?

So, overall, 2 out of 5. Sorry, Phinal, but your style of storyline isn't my favorite.

Wednesday, December 21, 2011

Fanfic 2 Read: Super Sentai Vs Power Rangers

This one supposed to be known as Fanfic (NOT) 2 Read. I don't like this thing, but I'll still review it anyway.

Super Sentai Vs Power Rangers is a fanfiction made by Sean Akizuki. Looking at how good this blog goes, one would have thought that this fic is going to be superb.

It's not.

This one sucks so bad. So bad that even Long would rather run into Doukokugan back.

This fic is known for how over biased the story goes. Sean favors more of his favorite characters than others and even bashing some characters. Read it on your own risk. Wear sunglasses in case of bleeding.

The story starts with Jetman recruiting some of the newer Super Sentai teams to build a team to fight the evil forces of United Alliance of Evil, consist of Radiguet (leader) and some other villains, mostly big bads of both Power Rangers and Super Sentai series. While that happen, Power Rangers (Saban's version only) eventually shown up and join forces with the Super Sentai. The bad guys travel across the time to create a paradox in order to eliminate Super Sentai once and for all while the good guys prevent those from happening. Owh, Gokaiger here isn't canon, so consider this story is AU.

Sounds really cool, isn't it? Except the part where Sean didn't use the characters available in the story. This thing gives out a lot of issues that I might could not mention all in this post.

In that abomination, we will mostly seen Takeru, Mako, Gai Yuuki, Hoji, Gokaigers, Satoru, Sakura, Cole, MMPR, Justin, PR Samurai, Kaoru, Spike and some others I could not traced. The funny thing is, it is already mentioned in the first chapter and forwards that there are a lot of Super Sentai in that secret base, yet Sean keeps on using some that he loves, leave the one he is neutral with doing nothing, and punish the one that he doesn't really likes.

Let's have a riddle for a while. What do you get when you cross Jetman with softer and lighter tone? A punch from a Jetman's fan.

Okay, so you are telling me that you are combining characters from darker series and lighter series into one fanfic? That's fine, but at least don't make the whole story softer then Goseiger.

I feel like reading Power Rangers adaptation here! The whole storyline is so not making any sense that even Bruce Kalish will laugh out loud and die on his bed for this!

First, we have a really bad characteristic change. Every single people there sounds so bad. They doesn't sound what they are supposed to sound like. Even Radiguet gets the same treatment. He suddenly looks stupid more than Oiles Gils. He is supposed to become a character everyone hate and suddenly he become an ass clown.

And why is he the leader of bad guys? Why not Long? He is the immortal dragon. And how did Radiguet knows how to seal Long back to Doukokugan? Did he learn Rin Jyuken? This doesn't make sense even one bit!

Okay, this one still have Gokaiger in it. It's non-canon style, fine. But where is Marvelous badassery! He is supposed to be one dude most girls would fell for, if he is not be careful. Him in this just being plain.

And since we have thousand of character here, we have to bear reading their full names over and over. I mean, is it really hard for everyone to memorized the characters that was taken from TV SHOWS!?

And we have weird crack pairings. Kiros and Mako? Okay, that's fine. Yosuke and Tori? Hmm...that's interesting. Hurricanger and Ninja Storm... Billy and Ranru? Uh-huh...*stare* Spike and Kaoru? Wait, what? Radiguet and Kimberly? Cole and Sakura? WHAT. THE. HELL. IS THIS GUY THINKING!? Are you making an interracial porn here? Or is this just another stupid wet dream and you had to share that with us?

And some good characters are mentioned with out them doing anything good! What's with that? What were they doing this whole time? Did they say anything about going to join in the fight?

And I am sick on looking at how (you know what. He disgraced the name Sean, so I just called him Zukini) Zukini loves Cole so much that he had AkaRed infuse body with him and giving him his own Super Sentai form called Red Conquerer, which is basically Gao Red/Red Wild Force with AkaRed's helmet. Can't you at least make it original?

Why and how AkaRed infused his body with Cole? Just because AkaRed made of hope of past Super Sentai, doesn't mean he doesn't have a solid body to fight by his own. Why Cole? Why you paired him with Sakura? And why Sakura?

We also had to see the same character over and over that it feels like any other people there are just demoted to kurokos.

And he keep on bashing anyone he dislike over and over and thinking about how funny that event is. Which is not. Is Zukini is a bully in his school that he enjoys looking at other people misery? Is that why he made that detention center scene, which is unnecessary and stupid at the same time?

Detention center is a place where Zukini use this punish anyone he dislike by putting stones on their back (or that's what I read). What is this, a military? Did you expect all other rangers are as tough as when they are not transformed?

The fight scene isn't good either. One thing we knew there will be a huge great fight and 2 seconds later we found out the good guy wins. He doesn't even describe how the fight goes. Did you know how long we authors had to take just to make a good fight scene? Don't ignore it like it is not important!

And don't get me started on the Ranger Keys segment that is recently aired. If you guys didn't know how Ranger Keys actually work, it can only be used by being held by their original users and through Mobirate and Gokai Cellular, except Gokaigers' Ranger Keys since they are powers in the form key anyways.

By the word of Zukini, you only need to hold the key tight and shout the magic words (the words those Sentai used to transform) to become the specific rangers. That doesn't make sense, even if the whole story is AU. What if I hold Go-On Gold and Go-On Silver keys, can I become Go-On Wings? Or Gokai Red and Gokai Green, can I become Battle Italia-I mean, Gokai Christmas? Or if I were showered in all keys, can become an abomination of Super Sentai by shouting those words one by one? Can I call that Chimera Ranger (which I'm going to use in one of my fics)?

The whole story is suck so bad! Even the crossover with other past Sentais' interactions is bad! The whole time traveling is like as follows: Hey, It's that guy! Let's fight together! Don't worry, I'll handle this. Done, bye-bye!

You know, it's suck so bad that I wish Zukini turns into the real Zuccini so Radiguet can eat him...

There's a lot of thing I would like to say, but I get information explosion when I am writing this post. It's just too many that many people had complained over and over. And yet he doesn't even listen to us.

I give this sh- pickle 0.1 stars out of 5. No pictures and links given through the post because it doesn't deserve this. Just google it yourself if you want to read this so bad...

Tuesday, November 22, 2011

Fanfic 2 Read: Super Sentai Vs Super Sentai

A proper massively multiplayer story featuring one character from each team from Goranger towards Shinkenger (no Goseiger and Gokaiger, sorry folks).

Well, minus that one beside Shinken Red and all of his team, of course...
Yes, it is Super Sentai Vs Super Sentai by Neo Juste Belmont. There's also Another version.

The first Super Sentai Vs Super Sentai consists of Takeru (Shinken Red), Youhei (Blue Turbo), Miki (Goggle Pink), Gai (Black Condor), Sayaka (Change Mermaid), Remi (Five Yellow), Dai (Green Flash) and Mako (Shinken Pink). Also featuring Yuusuke (Red Flacon) and Ryuu (Dyna Black).

Another is a story about the second team consists of Takeru (Red Mask), Hoji (Deka Blue), Mei (Ptera Ranger), Jiraiya (Ninja Black), Chisato (Mega Yellow), Mele (Chameleon-ken User) and Mikoto (Abare Killer). Also featuring Sakura (Bouken Pink).

Although in different teams, both share the near identical storyline; AkaRed's team fought a Big Bad called Rufecil in a parallel world where Super Sentai other than them does not exist. Villains from each team appear in that world with those heroes are summoned into that world. The whole story plot is all about a prophecy about a team consist of 7-colored warriors are destined to save that world. But, since there is two team already, we would have this 'Double Rainbow' feeling. Hope no one will get high reading this....

Belmont gives a good storyline for each of the rangers and managed to create a balanced storyline with no one being given a lot of focus; neither Gai nor Takeru. Also, their interactions with each other are very well done, with no one being out of characters.

But, there is something that make me sad, Shinkenger Love, a phenomenon causes by a lot of fans giving them more priority. In the first team, there are two Shinkengers represantatives, Takeru and Mako. I do hope Mako is just an extra, mainly because I don't want to see too much Takeru/Mako moment. But...then again, Belmont knows what is he doing...

I can't really see any flaws in that story. It's all done too well to be criticize. The only thing I can say is that, 'SUPPORT HIM!" Don't you guys ever let this good story to be left hanging without any proper ending, just like what happened to any other good fics.

I give this thing 4 out of 5

Sunday, July 24, 2011

Fanfic 2 Read: Kamen Rider CLAW

Today I will review about Kamen Rider CLAW by Shuriken16. To be honest, I really love this story and I really wish someone would make this a TV series, maybe having the first American Kamen Rider series and the first original American Tokusatsu.

This story is about a high school teenager named Nolan Johnson also known as Kamen Rider CLAW: Shinobi Mode fighting a group of dream invaders called Dreamon along side his friends, Timothy "Tim" Johnson (this name is what I got from Kamen Rider Fanfic Wikia. He is NOT Nolan's family member) and Yuliya Kim.

Nolan Johnson is your typical school boy. He seems always wanted to be a hero and making this journal called The Rules of The Hero. His attitude is always positive and always impressive, since my favorite style of protagonist is a positive person. He later works with SADE organization after becoming Kamen Rider the first time. He also gets a small mechanical tiger robot, named Tigerton, which would be upgraded into Kaiger. He later gets a pairing Nolan/Jessie after the girl blackmailing him to become her bodyguard.

Tim Johnson is somehow a jerk in the beginning. He is Kamen Rider CLAW: Marksmen Mode. Tim later become less jerk and more friendly for some reason. He also his pairing of Tim/Yuliya, but not as obvious as Nolan/Jessie. His partner is Kiba.

Yuliya Kim is a half-Korean, half-Russian girl who supposed to be CLAW: Shinobi Mode in the first place, but Nolan gets to be one, making her pissed off. But, to my disappointment, she is not a jerk around him and becoming his friend quicker than I thought. Yuliya can be considered as a senior for Nolan & Tim, literally as she enters SADE when she is 13 and the first among the three. She later gets to become the second user of Kamen Rider CLAW: Samurai Mode. Her partner is Kyuki.

Dominick Gracia is their commander, who is also act as their mentor. He is briefly shown as the first user of CLAW: Samurai Mode when training with Nolan and in his flashback. He is also the one who is responsible for making Yuliya and Tim joining the SADE. He later dies and *spoiler* (revealed to be evil all along and become Kamen Rider Dark CLAW: Chaos Mode.)

Jessie Stewart is a new girl. She is paired up with Nolan. That's all I can say.

Now, for the review. One of the unique things about this story is how the Rider System works. The author makes a good choice of not making a new rider. Instead the riders are more of a form change, but each form designated to only one person. They use a mechanical robotic partner called CLAW Beasts, insert a key into their mouth, turning them into a claw and scan them onto a belt.

Those forms also have their own specialty. Shinobi mode is more of speed, while Marksmen is strength and Samurai is a balanced form. They do get their sub-form, using Speed CLAW, Power CLAW and Flight CLAW. Only Nolan changes into all three from.

As for Nolan, he also has his other form called Kaiser mode. No, it is not a final form. The final form is Kaiser Trinity, where Nolan uses all three sub-form at once.

The enemy is also interesting. Basically, they are a group of Oni who invaded people's nightmare and change use their body to become Dreamon, allowing them to walk in the real world. Those Oni are came from their own world, which I forgot the name already.

And..the twist. Damn, I love the twist.

Overall, I really love this story. It really spikes me up, making me waste my time reading it.



The whole story is great. I really love it. Great plot and not too confusing.